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【韵译】：政治清明时代绝无隐者存在，为朝政服务有才者纷纷出来。连你这个象谢安的山林隐者，也不再效法伯夷叔齐去采薇。你应试落弟不能待诏金马门，那是命运不济谁说吾道不对？去年寒食时节你正经过江淮，滞留京洛又缝春衣已过一载。我们又在长安城外设酒饯别，同心知己如今又要与我分开。你行将驾驶着小船南下归去，不几天就可把自家柴门扣开。远山的树木把你的身影遮盖，夕阳余辉映得孤城艳丽多彩。你暂不被录用纯属偶然的事，别以为知音稀少而徒自感慨！
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